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I finally wrote another poem (my first in over a week). It's even darker than even Rosemary and Cyanide  Rosemary and Cyanide (Jumpstarts and Antidotes)A bitter taste fills my mouth
But I can’t seem to get it out.
I’m choking and I’m crying;
I’m drowning, slowly dying…
 
Darkness fills me from the inside out,
Slowly working its way up my throat.
It kind of tastes a lot like suicide
With hints of rosemary and cyanide.
 
I start to vomit and to cough
But it just isn’t enough;
I’m dying inside, is it too late?
Is this death simply my fate?
 
A curtain of black falls over my eyes
Blinding me to all of Life’s lies.
Poisoned by the darkness in my head,
I break down until I wish I was dead.
 
I can feel you saving me like a jumpstart
To my broken apart, pitiful excuse of a heart.
I can feel you curing me like an antidote
Now these words aren’t the last I ever wrote…
, but I'm pretty happy with how it turned out, it just needs some editing work, but I've sent it to a friend that always has a couple of little changes to add, and I'm just waiting for them to get back to me, then I'll see what changes I want to work in, and post it.
So yeah, I'll leave you with the little couplet that first popped into my head and wouldn't disappear until I wrote a poem to go with it: 
Everything is all right but I'm all wrong,
And so begins the endless siren song

**Update**
I've posted it!!!
So here you go, my first poem in what feels like forever:
Siren SongA voice rings in my head but not my ear,
Telling me all I don’t want to hear,
Like how in this life I don’t belong
And so begins the silent siren song…
 
Everything is great, maybe even divine,
Yet I’m still not okay or even barely fine.
Everything is alright but I’m all wrong,
Being driven insane by that siren song…
 
Every moment seems to last forever,
In a cycle that even love can’t sever.
This short life feels far too long
When hearing the slow siren song…
 
The voice still echoes within my head,
Singing of everything it knows I dread.
I’m starting to lose the will to carry on,
Sick of hearing this siren song…
 
I start to wonder if Death’s endless bliss
Is worth the pain of those that would miss
Me when I’m forever dead and gone,
Overcome and taken by the siren song…
 
Death is sounding more and more attractive
As I lose track of reasons to continue to live.
So now I’m givi

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kabasage's avatar
I really liked Rosemary and Cyanide! It was so good!